Michelle, 9, Hororata Primary School

My eyes flickered open to a petrifying sound. Everything was pitch black like the night sky. I heard muffled screams from every direction. I took everything in slowly with fright. I felt for my lamp and I jerked down the switch quickly and compellingly. It would not even flicker. Devoted to my bed, I gave out my vital screams.

2 Responses to “Michelle, 9, Hororata Primary School”

  1. Bob says:

    Cool story!! love it.

  2. Mrs Macpherson says:

    What a great story Michelle! I’m so impressed. Keep up your very powerful writing. (Miss Mead)

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