Comments on: Descriptive writing by Kiwi Class, Year 4-6 at Ladbrooks School /2010/09/descriptive-writing-by-kiwi-class-year-4-6-at-ladbrooks-school/ Sun, 02 Sep 2012 08:30:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=4.1.18 By: Sandy Hastings /2010/09/descriptive-writing-by-kiwi-class-year-4-6-at-ladbrooks-school/#comment-5 Tue, 14 Sep 2010 18:18:55 +0000 /?p=76#comment-5 Wow! What awesome descriptive writing! It did feel like an angry monster under the ground who was shaking us fiercely about! Isn’t it great to realise that we were able to survive an event like that and that we live in a community where people help and support each other in times of trouble.

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By: Room 6 Dunsandel School /2010/09/descriptive-writing-by-kiwi-class-year-4-6-at-ladbrooks-school/#comment-2 Tue, 14 Sep 2010 00:36:05 +0000 /?p=76#comment-2 Sounds scary, no damage in Dunsandel though. Liam B. You have really good descriptive writing.Caleb Sounds scary, hope everyone is ok now. Vicky I liked your descriptive language. Maddison Sounds shaky. Danielle Been there, done that and we’re okay. Alex B

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